Wednesday, January 20, 2010

Sentence Style

Original: What happened to childhood?

  1. Where did the sun in the child's eyes go?
  2. Where did the sound of play run off to?
  3. When did all the children die?
  4. Are children even children anymore?
  5. What happened to being a kid?
  6. Children, here? I see none.
  7. I see families, young and old, but no children.
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  1. BradenJanuary 21, 2010 at 11:47 PM

    Such talent! I love the first variation, as it has such an emotional and visual pull to it.

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