Thursday, January 21, 2010

Stylish Sentences - :)

My older sister, Carrie, attended Brigham Young University.

1. Carrie attended BYU.
2. Brigham Young University was haunted by my sister's presence.
3. Carrie graduated from BYU.
4. The University of Brigham Young once held Carrie.
5. Carrie is a BYU alumni.
6. My older sister has escaped with a BYU diploma.
7. Carrie moseyed along through college.


P.S. Personally, sentence 2 is my favorite.

5 comments:

  1. Lol thanks for making me laugh!! I like the diversity in your sentences! they all say the same thing yet very differently! good job

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  2. I really loved your creativeness! They were highly entertaining and I loved how you varied the sentence structure. My favorite thing though was your smiley face with the mohawk in your title. :)

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  3. HA HA!! Amanda, I didn't even realize my smiley face had a mohawk, I was just doing a dash. This just made my title 100 times better! I'm brilliant and I didn't even know it.
    I'm glad I could make you laugh, Ty.

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  4. I really like your sentences too! They really do carry such different styles and emotions!

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  5. It's interesting how a word like 'haunt' can completely change the intention of a sentence although the information gathered is almost identical.

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