Thursday, January 21, 2010

Sleep Deprivation

Original Sentence:
I am tired.

1. Sleep, my dear friend, where art thou?
2. I have not slipped into unconsciousness in a while.
3. I am exhausted.
4. I feel deprived of that which brings me rest.
5. I am but a hollow shell without that deep relaxation called sleep.
6. What is that thing called sleep?
7. Numbness creeps in to fell the void created by sleep deprivation.

1 comment:

  1. I like the frist sentence. It is a lot more formal then normal day-to-day english which make this question sound like a dramatic plea. Which isn't bad. I think it is a great use of the style.

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